Starts to Fall (Christian/Indie/worship song)

A song I wrote, that I would really like feedback on. :) And pardon my voice. The recording's not that impressive since it's just a cheap mic and an old guitar, but I would really love your comments. <br />
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Lyrics: (two lines have been taken out since recording, the last line from vs. 1 and 2)<br />
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To many times I&acirc;��ve run to my room crying <br />
Shut the door, begging &acirc;��please no more now&acirc;�� <br />
Feeling the urge that no one&acirc;��s there for me <br />
I start to fall, sinking to my knees <br />
Another attack retreating to the river of tears <br />
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I want to find my home <br />
This one&acirc;��s not for me <br />
A place to call my own <br />
Where people care for me <br />
A strong tower to be my rest <br />
I want to fly in your peacefulness <br />
All I can do is call <br />
I cannot wait till this world starts to fall <br />
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Everyday I think I wish to hard <br />
The problems I face have gone on way to far <br />
Every rumble in the sky I dream for a second coming <br />
This bread of tears makes me want to come home running <br />
Everystep I feel my troubles like broken glass <br />
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I want to find my home <br />
This one&acirc;��s not for me <br />
A place to call my own <br />
Where people care for me <br />
A strong tower to be my rest <br />
I want to fly in your peacefulness <br />
All I can do is call <br />
I cannot wait
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