Hi Kim, Good melody and lyrics so far. I would have to see them written down though to add something to it. Just keep it all together and say what the Lord puts on your heart. God Bless You!
Kim- What a great start! I also love the lyrics added by cosmos60. I do not have a great musical voice, however in my walk with the Lord and also walk with other fellow sisters/brothers, a common question we ALL ask is "Where ARE you Jesus? Are you living here with us TODAY?" the answer to that is in your chorus, and in cosmos60's words! HE is active HERE and NOW! Good luck with the project! May the Lord be your words to the world, as you honor Him with this beautiful song.
Great...thanks for the invitation. The lyrics suggestions below sounds good. I'm sorry I can't contribute much to the song as I am not terribly talented in the music are.
ok, just tried to leave my 2. comment on your vid without success. so to be sure here for the third time: to give you an idea of the music, just play/sing as follows: EFG-pause-GGGFFEF, then DEF-pause-FFFEEDE, but you have to adopt it to your notes. your lyrics could be the chorus, my proposal: "When I pray, it's your love comforting me, When I praise, it's your holy Spirit leading me"... and then again your chorus.
stay blessed
You are very welcome. What a great idea to get us all together for our input on your song. I hope my two lines make it in LOL. God bless you today and for an eternity. Praise Jesus!
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